Brochure for a Perfume's shop
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shagor1981
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These brochures are prepared for a Brand Perfume's shop, which is going to launch at Bashundhara City Shopping Mall at the end of february 2009. I want to get dd's comments and critiques about these.
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parthasarker
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Color combination bhalo lagse.. design also nice...
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ok its time to critique point of my view:
design one:
overall color is nice. but the footer and header color doesn't matches with the whole color. color of the header and footer is not smart as the body/theme. choose darker shade from the body color you used. Scent bottle is standing empty. you can use outer glow. It will add something.
design two:
both the colors are selected smartly. Since you are using white text, eyes expect darker background. After all someone has to read it. so you can make the background more darker keeping same color.
Make the title "Perfumes World" bold and white "P" and "Wor" are not looking good. better change it. USE BETTER SHAPE FOR THE SHOP ADDRESS. remove/change the color of the black shade of green box. Atleast not black.
I hope these will make those more better. Overall Fantastic job.
Thanks
design one:
overall color is nice. but the footer and header color doesn't matches with the whole color. color of the header and footer is not smart as the body/theme. choose darker shade from the body color you used. Scent bottle is standing empty. you can use outer glow. It will add something.
design two:
both the colors are selected smartly. Since you are using white text, eyes expect darker background. After all someone has to read it. so you can make the background more darker keeping same color.
Make the title "Perfumes World" bold and white "P" and "Wor" are not looking good. better change it. USE BETTER SHAPE FOR THE SHOP ADDRESS. remove/change the color of the black shade of green box. Atleast not black.
I hope these will make those more better. Overall Fantastic job.
Thanks
Asif Shahid
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amar kasey 2tai bhalo lagsey... but color blue ta bayshi bhao lagsey...blue ta konakoni sharp ta aktoo onoo rokom korley may be aroo bhaloo hobey 
*** D&G bangladesh akon asey dek a bhalo lagbo................ oder product gola bhalo... u should try... man.... and if you have gf/wife then u have to gift ..... most of European girl like D&G Perfume....
anyway.... "Dior" bangladesh iley akta awaj dihen
good work man.
*** D&G bangladesh akon asey dek a bhalo lagbo................
oder product gola bhalo... u should try... man.... and if you have gf/wife then u have to gift ..... most of European girl like D&G Perfume....anyway.... "Dior" bangladesh iley akta awaj dihen
good work man.
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