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sarahbd
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I've designed frontpage and subpage samples for a friend who would be developing website for a dental clinic.
Please comment so that I can give a good output. Thanks!


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ok... let me tell something about it..

ok sarah ami personally big background like kori.. so home page i like much.. nav. also ok.. i mean overall home page is ok.. but subpage bit dull.... try to do something on body part..... use some ornament or else on header or footer
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ok its my turn now :)

Home page: Tremendous (Y). I also like big banner/background. One thing that I feel your home page is looking slight imbalance content wise. Right side is containing more objects compare to Left.
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SubPage: yes completely dull. One reason can be GRAY background. Gray always try to make others dull :D Another reason can be the Home Page. Your home page increases the expectation of visitors. When they will browse sub pages may feel empty.

I liked your mouse over effect most :D

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Home page is simple and good but for both the pages, top shadow is little too much... Size and opacity could be reduced... Second page's background could be white or very close to white like #f7f7f7...
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sarahbd
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asif bhai, i was expecting this imbalance comment :)
well.. the right side would be like this for users with very high resolution (it will repeat the background towards right).. center e main rekhe dui dikeo barano jeto but it seems too common... with users having 1024x768, it will resize (keeping the left fixed).. so it wont look bad.. moreover the actual bg would be something that is a very big image (with the right most fading out to solid color) and when resized it wont look odd when cropped..


about the sub page, please suggest some tips :) ... thanks everyone :)
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U gotta read all the posts for tips. Few tips have been given in those posts above... Those might help u if u have an effort to make changes accordingly. Perhaps u can just have a try to make sure whether they really works...
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here are few samples for subpages' body part... u'll get some idea from those...

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thanks a lot pagol and chhagol bhai :)
@chhagol bhai: i have already noted your suggestion... i just wanted more tips from everybody else.. :)
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Sara, U r hardly visible outta those posts that r of yours. Why is it so? Can't a little more time be spent for us to share something about u'r personal life as we do???
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