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emran987
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Hello All,
Hope eveybody is safe.

Today i shared my recent client work. This is approved Homepage and inner pages are on WIP. So i need your feedback what need to develop.

Project hints: This homepage is all about listing directory site like Bikroy.com where users can buy, rent services or products easily.

Waiting for your valuable feedbacks are alwys received with love and smile. :)

Regards
Ibrahim Emran
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pagol
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আমার কাছে ফ্ল্যাগ টা বড় লাগসে এবং মনে হই ল্যাঙ্গুয়েজ box পাশে মাতছিং হই নাই

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এই আইকন রঙ সবুজ কেন ? অন্য সব আইকন নীল রঙ । মিল নাই

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লাল মার্ক করা পার্ট একটু বেশি হাল্কা । আরও একটু ব্ল্যাক করলে ভাল লাগবে অ্যান্ড ইউজারদের পরতে ইজি হই

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লাল মার্ক করা পার্ট একটু বেশি হাল্কা । আরও একটু ব্ল্যাক করলে ভাল লাগবে অ্যান্ড ইউজারদের পরতে ইজি হই

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এই আইকন গোলা কি কালারফুল হইলে কেমন লাগবে একটু করে দেকতে পারেন । এখন বেশী হাল্কা লাগে

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এখনে ইমেজ নাম্বার না দিয়ে যদি আমরা ডট ডট অ্যান্ড ক্লিক/স্বিপ able function (slider) করি তাহলে ইউজার জন্য ইজি হইতে পারে

দুঃখিত আইগলা আমার ব্যক্তিগত মতামত
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Thanks for sharing your design with us. Modern style UI with soothing color makes it trendy and gorgeous. Good job done.
As it's already approved, you may consider some questions for dev hand-off-

1. What will happen when more menu items are added?
2. What will the view for the long category icon name?
3. What will happen when more category items are added?
4. Can listing items be slid right to the left?

And for UI related feedback, I agree with @pagol vai. And here're my a few more thoughts-

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Happy designing :dd:
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emran987
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pagol wrote:
Sat May 30, 2020 1:25 am
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আমার কাছে ফ্ল্যাগ টা বড় লাগসে এবং মনে হই ল্যাঙ্গুয়েজ box পাশে মাতছিং হই নাই

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এই আইকন রঙ সবুজ কেন ? অন্য সব আইকন নীল রঙ । মিল নাই

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লাল মার্ক করা পার্ট একটু বেশি হাল্কা । আরও একটু ব্ল্যাক করলে ভাল লাগবে অ্যান্ড ইউজারদের পরতে ইজি হই

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লাল মার্ক করা পার্ট একটু বেশি হাল্কা । আরও একটু ব্ল্যাক করলে ভাল লাগবে অ্যান্ড ইউজারদের পরতে ইজি হই

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এই আইকন গোলা কি কালারফুল হইলে কেমন লাগবে একটু করে দেকতে পারেন । এখন বেশী হাল্কা লাগে

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এখনে ইমেজ নাম্বার না দিয়ে যদি আমরা ডট ডট অ্যান্ড ক্লিক/স্বিপ able function (slider) করি তাহলে ইউজার জন্য ইজি হইতে পারে

দুঃখিত আইগলা আমার ব্যক্তিগত মতামত

Thanks Bhai for your valuable and constractive feedback. Some implemented below
1. Decreased the flag size.
2. Icon color keep it different intentionally because of eye friendly notice. and client also said to keep 2/1 icons different color.
3. Yes colord also changed.
4. I made these icons with brand color. looks too colorful in this section thats why made these gray.
5. Used dots in inner pages. This site allow total 12 images for each ads. So12 dots hard to show on there.


These feedbacks are really good for me. For next time will look after these kinds of lacking.

Thanks again vaiya
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Very nice design Emran. Thanks for sharing with us.

I agree with both Biju and Shad.

Want to add few things -

1. Your nicely illustrated banner is a good start for the page but later there is no trace of any illustration.

2. For categories, you can use icons instead of images. images are not working here. Also if you use icons, it will be consistent and can make a connection to the illustrated banner. You already have those icons illustrated.

3. In popular searches, it seems there are too many popular items. You can drop one row. Then it will be more meaningful.

4. Sell anything on Smartarz - You can make this section more interesting. black mobile can be blue ... need to consistent with your top banner.

5. Footer can be interesting than this.

overall you can see too much white and monotonous. Using green background for some sections can break this monotonousness.

I also want to see the mobile version of this ( if you have)

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emran987
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asifshahid wrote:
Mon Jun 01, 2020 11:22 am
Very nice design Emran. Thanks for sharing with us.

I agree with both Biju and Shad.

Want to add few things -

1. Your nicely illustrated banner is a good start for the page but later there is no trace of any illustration.

2. For categories, you can use icons instead of images. images are not working here. Also if you use icons, it will be consistent and can make a connection to the illustrated banner. You already have those icons illustrated.

3. In popular searches, it seems there are too many popular items. You can drop one row. Then it will be more meaningful.

4. Sell anything on Smartarz - You can make this section more interesting. black mobile can be blue ... need to consistent with your top banner.

5. Footer can be interesting than this.

overall you can see too much white and monotonous. Using green background for some sections can break this monotonousness.

I also want to see the mobile version of this ( if you have)

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Thank you so much vai for your valuable comments. And sorry for Late reply.

Yeah these are some implemented and updated in latter stage with client deman. Though this version also directed by client.

And most interesting things is, i almost completed 5 major web pages and 8 major app screens. Now client again hired me to do new version homepage.
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