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mattal
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plz post ur important comments on the design i made,
these r some of my footwear design,
designed in ABOBE ILLUSTRATOR 10.0

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First of all Nice concept man!......now starting comments:

First design (Left): color combination ta bhalo lagchena....background color gulao professional na.....try with other color scheme....

First design (Right): Josh....Perfect to me.....sandal and background colors ee bhalo contrast hoyeche....sandal er shape tao moja hoyeche...liked it..so no comment from my end :D

Second design (Left): feeling same problem with color combination with background. you can do more work on that shoe....completed work mone hochena....

Second design (Right): Nice...like the shadows....you can do the drawing more better for perfection.....overall like it

GOOD JOB :)
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excellent !! I liked all of them.. your main focus was footwear design and you have done it very well.. background is not my concern :-) I really liked your design style of the sandal and shoes...those are really cool. Keep up the good work :-)
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thNz, for u comments, actually i want to implement soMe new techniques in footwear designing, liKe the Shirt & Tie For the 1ST one, shape change in Sole for 2nD Sandal.

to me not only the design , the presEntaTions is also important,soon i will try to make some change in the presentation of ThE desigN.
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cool job done........
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