Distorted Designers

these are some cards, plz give some suggestions. asif bhai i am still looking for the perspective description.

Top Left:
Liked most among all. But there are few comments:
1. URL is too small compare to other fonts, which is really important for a company.
2. You used 3 different font sizes, which sometimes messed up, exactly what is happening here. I personally don't like to use more than 2 font and more than 2 sizes in Business card/letterhead. But if you can manage, then ok.
3.No need to bold the company address. Always try to emphasize in one/two things in card.

Top Right:
1.Looks like a ATM/Credit card.
2.In business card: whatever you design, you have to ensure the objective of the card which is make it readable. Red on black background is vibrating. Tough to read.

Bottom Left:
Also liked it.
1. Did the URL beat you? Make it larger.
2. You use gradient in lower left which is trying to hide your text.

Bottom Right:
Nothing to say. I think I covered most of them in previous comments

I have designed one based on your 1st design to show how you could make it more simple and nicer.



Ekta chhotto kotha: emon kono business card design korben na jeta kauke deyar por she wallet ee na rekhe fele dey. Emon business card design korte chesta korben jeta kauke dile she arekta cheye ney to show someone what you did

thanks

updated version of the card is uploaded...............

Ya better. Liked 1st one most . one comment in image

next time please separate your cards with border. no boundary

hi, i have already said that i am new here, so i dont have much knowledge on printing after the design.

will be there any problem of visibility in the area of the red bar, where the url and email add is given. and in logo the lower line seems to touch the black line.

its ok that you are new. we don't mind. we dont bite hahahah kidding.
Designs are cool. bhalo furnished hoyeche. tobe 3 and 4 er logor watermark ta bhalo lagchena...i mean properly place hoynai...and ei logo ta ektu tricky way te place korte hobe....anyways printing ee bhalo ashbe as I can see....tobe ensure bhalo printers....to be in safe side text gula bold kore den(red areas text).

final output:
1. Ensure Crop Mark
2. unlock all
3. unhide all
3. Create Outline (text)
4. export/save as .eps (10 version)

any confusion let me know

thanks

hahhahahahh, asif bhai, i know u guys will not bite me........................thanks a lot for all the help.

i have already done all the steps tht u have mentioned. thanks again.

Kowsar Ahmed wrote:hahhahahahh, asif bhai, i know u guys will not bite me........................thanks a lot for all the help.

i have already done all the steps tht u have mentioned. thanks again.

Best of luck