Hi all.......
i just read the story........not that much bad at all....r u going to make a comic strip based on this script?.well......
character & the background both must be strong & bold .....which catch the attention of the audience....
First create a character!!!! i mean CHARACTER with personality.......for that u need to draw 5 - 10 sketches to finalize the characters........
Less line + more expression..........option A
Sketchy lines + dramatic tone ...........option B
FX + dynamic camera angle............option C
Drawing & coloring quality of your team decides the style of the comic.
solid coloring [saw an eg.on one page] is good if u can draw perfect figure construction......
Otherwise sketchy style is ............u know
Its a good attempt ..carry on.........
contact me if u want .....
mail me
shudhi@gmail.com
thx
shudhi