Need design feedback

[emran987]

Hello All
Hope everyone is good and safe now.
Here i presented a design need all of your valuable feedback to improve the UX & UI of the Design.

Design Summry: This Micro Landing page designed for a Insurance company targating TAX rebates assurance with 3 premium packages.

More inner pages are coming soon.






Thanks
Ibrahim Emran

[pagol]

thanks for sharing with us. I think after banner there have big content area (only text) . that part need to improve more. also can you explain why view details button used 3 different color

[emran987]

thanks for sharing with us. I think after banner there have big content area (only text) . that part need to improve more. also can you explain why view details button used 3 different color

thanks vaiya for valuable feedback. Definitely i'll work on this

[asifshahid]

Hello Emran, sorry for late reply. Thanks for sharing your design with us.

After examine your design few time, I feel it requires some UI improvement.

Let me explain my concerns here -

1. Logo - The Logo can have bit more white space around it. Currently it looks bit squeezed.

2. Banner- Not sure about the banner. Seems it is an ad. However page related banner would be more appropriate to start a page. Also you are talking about social distancing, but in the banner people are handshaking. Need to re-think about the banner.

3. No Title - I still don't know what page it is. As you mentioned it is a landing page, but it should have title such as- Tax Rebate Made Easy or may be Delta Life Insurance. Rest Assuered! seems out of place.

4. Button Colour - Agree with Biju bhai on using different colours for each buttons. Any particular reason?

5. Videos - Videos should be placed under appropriate sections. Currently it seems those are just dumped at the end of the page.

6. Contact Us - I believe, this is very important section on this page. It demands better treatment in UI.

7. Font - Overall I didn't like the font. Seems bit stretched (horizontally). Colour may be okay, but it is not working when tied with black font. You can keep the same colour across the page.

8. Padding - Overall you can increase the padding from both left and right side. This will give a nice and compact view. Currently it's too loose.

Sorry for all the constructive feedbacks. But I believe fixing those will improve your UI immediately. Let us know if any question.

[emran987]

Hello Emran, sorry for late reply. Thanks for sharing your design with us.

After examine your design few time, I feel it requires some UI improvement.

Let me explain my concerns here -

1. Logo - The Logo can have bit more white space around it. Currently it looks bit squeezed.

2. Banner- Not sure about the banner. Seems it is an ad. However page related banner would be more appropriate to start a page. Also you are talking about social distancing, but in the banner people are handshaking. Need to re-think about the banner.

3. No Title - I still don't know what page it is. As you mentioned it is a landing page, but it should have title such as- Tax Rebate Made Easy or may be Delta Life Insurance. Rest Assuered! seems out of place.

4. Button Colour - Agree with Biju bhai on using different colours for each buttons. Any particular reason?

5. Videos - Videos should be placed under appropriate sections. Currently it seems those are just dumped at the end of the page.

6. Contact Us - I believe, this is very important section on this page. It demands better treatment in UI.

7. Font - Overall I didn't like the font. Seems bit stretched (horizontally). Colour may be okay, but it is not working when tied with black font. You can keep the same colour across the page.

8. Padding - Overall you can increase the padding from both left and right side. This will give a nice and compact view. Currently it's too loose.

Sorry for all the constructive feedbacks. But I believe fixing those will improve your UI immediately. Let us know if any question.

Thank you so much vaiya for your valuable feedback. I never take this negatively because i really want to catch up my lacks.
1. Yeah, logo updated later stage
2. Banner i used just dummy one. Our grapics team responsible for this
3. Total content given form Product team where i have no rights to use extra copy. But it could be good if i used title.
4. Previously i used one color just distinguished them using shades but product team asked to use different colors for these buttons
5+6. As per as product team requirments to use video there and no contact required just support number only on footer
7. Ussed from previous design guidlines
8. Yeah i agreed with that.

Here are obstacles and lacks from my end. After all i really encouraged to post more designs to improve my designs.

Thanks vaiya

[asifshahid]

I understand.

Do you know why product team wanted multiple colours on buttons? why they can't add or modify content? Why graphics team designed that banner which contradicts the content of the page? Why product team wanted to put videos there?

If you know the answer then do you agree with them? Did you have a proper session with them to explain your rationale or exchange both parties (designer/conent) concerns?

Sorry again Emran.

[emran987]

I understand.

Do you know why product team wanted multiple colours on buttons? why they can't add or modify content? Why graphics team designed that banner which contradicts the content of the page? Why product team wanted to put videos there?

If you know the answer then do you agree with them? Did you have a proper session with them to explain your rationale or exchange both parties (designer/conent) concerns?

Sorry again Emran.

Hello vaiya,
Thanks again for these questions.

Yeah, they wanted to make the buttons more visible to audiences.
Graphics team did that banner for other project i just used it as demo, they didn't design the banner yet. it's on WIP.
The video is less improtant that's why put it down of all content.

Acctually we UI UX team all time argue with business, product team for all kind of UX when we have available time. But For this project we have tight schedule ( Only 6 working days for 16 Pages Design & Markup) that's why to make it better we couldn't time.

Thanks vaiya

[asifshahid]

Thanks for your further clarification Emran. Make sense.

একটা সময় আসে যখন টিম গুলোর মাঝে পারসস্পরিক বোঝাপড়ার প্রয়োজন পরে। সেটা যত তাড়াতাড়ি সম্ভব ততো ভালো। এক্ষেত্রে টীম লিডারদের কাজ করা উচিত ।

[emran987]

Thanks for your further clarification Emran. Make sense.

একটা সময় আসে যখন টিম গুলোর মাঝে পারসস্পরিক বোঝাপড়ার প্রয়োজন পরে। সেটা যত তাড়াতাড়ি সম্ভব ততো ভালো। এক্ষেত্রে টীম লিডারদের কাজ করা উচিত ।

yes vaiya