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Zahid, the idea is to keep it simple in the begining. So, not much of a concept story rather small chunks of segments of thoughts. Like working on a joke or anecdote. So, if we start we can figure out how we'll be working together.
Here is a story I was planning to work on:
The ministers
Scene 1: Two ministers sitting in a lavishly furnished living room chatting.
Minister 1: Wow! Pretty good place you've got here. I wonder how you made this fortune working as a petty minister?
Minister 2: You really wanna know? Come over here ..
Scene 2: Both the ministers were standing by the view of a river with a bridge over head
Minister 2: See the river?
Minister 1: Yes
Minister 2: See the bridge?
Minister 1: Yes, of course!
Scene 3: Minister 2, with a huge grin on his face and Minister 1 with great astonishment and admiration on his expression
Minister 2: 5%
Scene 4: Both ministers shaking hands
Minister 1: Nice to visit your country. Hope to see you in my place in my country next month
Scene 5: Aeroplane flying in the air (Minister 2 is flying to visit the country of Minister 1)
Scene 6: Both the ministers meeting again. At this time at Minister 1's house - which is extremely gorgeous and decorated with verey expensive pieces and furnitures
Minister 2: Good Lord! It must have cost you a fortune this place! I wonder how you managed this working as a minister of such a poor country.
Minister 1: You really want to know? Come with me.
Scene 7: Both ministers standing over a view of a river
Minister 1: See the river?
Minister 2: Yes!
Miniter 1: See the bridge?
Minister 2: NO!!!
Scene 8: Minister 1 with a wide smile and winking at the surprized face of Minister 2
Minister 1: 100%
Let me know what you guys think. We can change the scenes and the story for the sake of drawing or coloring.
Here is a story I was planning to work on:
The ministers
Scene 1: Two ministers sitting in a lavishly furnished living room chatting.
Minister 1: Wow! Pretty good place you've got here. I wonder how you made this fortune working as a petty minister?
Minister 2: You really wanna know? Come over here ..
Scene 2: Both the ministers were standing by the view of a river with a bridge over head
Minister 2: See the river?
Minister 1: Yes
Minister 2: See the bridge?
Minister 1: Yes, of course!
Scene 3: Minister 2, with a huge grin on his face and Minister 1 with great astonishment and admiration on his expression
Minister 2: 5%
Scene 4: Both ministers shaking hands
Minister 1: Nice to visit your country. Hope to see you in my place in my country next month
Scene 5: Aeroplane flying in the air (Minister 2 is flying to visit the country of Minister 1)
Scene 6: Both the ministers meeting again. At this time at Minister 1's house - which is extremely gorgeous and decorated with verey expensive pieces and furnitures
Minister 2: Good Lord! It must have cost you a fortune this place! I wonder how you managed this working as a minister of such a poor country.
Minister 1: You really want to know? Come with me.
Scene 7: Both ministers standing over a view of a river
Minister 1: See the river?
Minister 2: Yes!
Miniter 1: See the bridge?
Minister 2: NO!!!
Scene 8: Minister 1 with a wide smile and winking at the surprized face of Minister 2
Minister 1: 100%
Let me know what you guys think. We can change the scenes and the story for the sake of drawing or coloring.
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Never never never change the scenes and the story for the sake of drawing or coloring.
This is good. This is really good. If I must negate, I think political jokes are becoming rather boring these days. Not that they are all bad but we read and heard too many of them.
But i really liked this one. An alternate idea, Scene 8 could end with just the wide smile and winking, no 100% dialouge. Gives a bit stronger punch don't you think?
This is good. This is really good. If I must negate, I think political jokes are becoming rather boring these days. Not that they are all bad but we read and heard too many of them.
But i really liked this one. An alternate idea, Scene 8 could end with just the wide smile and winking, no 100% dialouge. Gives a bit stronger punch don't you think?
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probably we should meet somewhere...how about tomorrow?
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i am ok...but after 6:00 pm....Probably KiLLSWiTCH don't have any problem....
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I like it. Question is what style of character design and coloring do you have in mind?
So much to eat, so little time !
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then initially 3 of us are meeting somewhere.
Sunday,Western Grill(beside Boomers), 6:00 PM. We are expecting Zahid bhai from our 2nd meeting.
Sunday,Western Grill(beside Boomers), 6:00 PM. We are expecting Zahid bhai from our 2nd meeting.
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KiLLSWiTCH, we are talking about colab, so, I'm guessing it will be a team effort. I already have done the character design of one minister with color scheme(that I uploaded in the character design thread), but that's not final or definitive. Anyone of us can come up with a new design or color scheme and the rest of us can choose. If you want, you can work on your own design or suggest adjusting mine.KiLLSWiTCH wrote:I like it. Question is what style of character design and coloring do you have in mind?
6 o'clock is a bit late, but I'll try. Would be best if it were after lunch or during lunch.
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so we can have our lunch at Boomers/Abacus/Western Grill.
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fine to us.....so at Boomers at 1:30 PM
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got few comments from Concept Art.org for this post-The Dusk. thought I should share it. click here
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