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What is the key to success

Poll ended at Sun Jul 13, 2008 9:21 pm

Ambition
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75%
Working Hard
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25%
Creative
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AIM
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Aspiration
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now Critique time :)
Top Banner: Background color is fine and also logo/title matches, but right part (IRON MAN is now playing!and repeated logo) does not matches at all. Actually what is the purpose of that is not clear to me.
Body: Banner work is fine, also the flash work(specially IRON MAN part). Again right part:) :thumbnail images need to be worked further. Its not matching with the base design.
Buttons: I didn't like. You can try with different gradients and font colors. But mouse over animation(Thunder)is nice :)

Afroza, I know its hard to accept others' critiques. But you can consider this as a personal opinion of mine. Don't take it into other way. Since you have posted your design in this section this is why I couldn't resist myself to throw negative comments :)

Thanks
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ki kichu koimo ? ok koi tailay

1. top banner aroo aktoo nice kortay hoibo.. and font i don't like ..

2. iron man background ta bhalo hoisay but color ta aktoo change koray top header color koray dektay paren kemon lagay. and iron man text font ta change koray IRON MAn official font (http://ironmanmovie.marvel.com/ ) and color effect use koren.. bhalo lagbay amar monay hoi...

3. iron man is now playing font and style bhalo hoi nah.. never mind please .. ok

4. right a thumb gola sob ak size hoilay bhalo hoi.. amar monay hoi.


ok madam mind koiren.. ja monay hoilay tai koilam.... hummm bhaloo kichu koilam nah :d caz agola sara r sob bhalo hoisay.. hee hee heeee... keep going..
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this site is already running so no way to change ... :) and the color, font everything was the clients requirement
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I know its all about client requirements. tarporo onek kichu ache jegula chance pele thik kore deya jay, ete client mind korbena. some of issues above there are like this. Its true that we design for clients but ultimately we use those as a our portfolio :) Dont get it wrong, just expressed my thoughts. :)
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BAYPER na///


My approach is to satisfy my clients, as they want the job to be done. :D :D
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Making a client fall for your own style is an art, skill and talent in itself. Jeta i guess we should develop more and more through experience, appreciating constructive criticism and observation. Taking calculated risk is part of the game.
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u guys r sipmly rock..

but amar kopal kub kharap -- client ra sob khut khuta publick hoi. but i agree with u amader portfolio ke strong korar age client ke satisfy korte hobe, as they want the job to be done. :D
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ho tek.. client goo agay happy kortay hoibo..

Client mani = Kobis
Client mani = TAKA $£$
Client mani = Tension
Client mani = Ghuma Haram
Client mani = Kes Kes kes
Client mani = BOLOD
Client mani = Crap ( heee heee )
Client mani = ?
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