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It’s a Brands jewelry Distribution company logo. Is it ok or if not comments pls, Client tall me logo color should be blue or some thing similar to blue



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very nice logo......cool symbol....i liked it very much....professional (Y).......tao ektu matobbori korlam.....what i tried to do:
1. brought two words "Premier" and "Brands" more closer
2. Placed "Bangladesh" below "Brands" (I am also confused about that. it becomes imbalanced. need other comments as well...:D)

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Thanks ASIF. Gap ta aktu komaice.

Client primarily select No.2 , but aro modify korajai kina bolce no.2 er font ta akti change hoice, but amar kase kano jani imbalance lagce, ar ki kora jai can u pls tall me. Its argent they give me only one day.

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humm diktay karap hoi na... ami logo boji kom... but dektay bhaloo hoi say.

ami khali koitay pari.. font ta change koray deykhen.. aroo aktooo commercial font use koray diktay paren... jayta asay karap na..

check some from there.

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pagol bhai is right...at this moment changing fonts can help you out.....you can play with colors like:
1. convert all colors into blue (as their preference), no gradient.
2. keep the symbol blue and make the words 70% Black.
3. try with putting the symbol over "P" or "B"
4. about gradient: reduce the value of the color. one side is more bright where other side is dark. reduce this distance.
ami hole ei try gula kortam.....you can do that.....hope for the best.....(Y)
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OK vi o bondhu.I will try according to your advice
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Pagol vi free font paowa jai kothai(free download)
Kono address ki jana ase
Jata dicen oikhane to kinte bole
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Font er shagor.....download korte hobe...ei ar ki
http://distortedesigners.com/forum/viewforum.php?f=32
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Ya, font ta futuristic category te pore gese (kharap na but), use a more general font, like executive fonts.

If I were you, I'd use more character spacing in the word "bangladesh" like this --> B A N G L A D E S H....so that the word starts below P of premier and ends at S of Brands. Get it? And use a thin elegant font and also the font should be smaller n light weight....so that it is understandable. Point is the highlight should be on the symbol n PREMIER BRANDS mainly...It may look good or may not, just a suggestion.
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Thanks for ur suggestion. Ya I did “B A N G L A D E S H” one. But the client doesn’t like it. They will go for the second one
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