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good design mostaq bhai, tobe overall apnar design ee ekta critique korte chai, that is - apnar design object gula stage er beshi kacha-kachi chole ashe...for and example, ei design ee White object er char-pashe space rekhechen...but top er space ta beshi kom...keno jani mone hoy design ta kata poreche....i hope ami bujhate perechi :D....

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Asif vai, u are totally right. I am doing some research and experiment on placing objects on the canvas. So, sometimes it feels that it's cut off. If I just put the whole thing center of the canvas, it's looks odd, so I tried to place them with the Golden Ratio. I am reading about this and Im lovin it.
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studiomaqs wrote:Asif vai, u are totally right. I am doing some research and experiment on placing objects on the canvas. So, sometimes it feels that it's cut off. If I just put the whole thing center of the canvas, it's looks odd, so I tried to place them with the Golden Ratio. I am reading about this and Im lovin it.
Maintaining golden ratio is always a good practice, though sometimes its hard to follow things properly.

Maq Bhai>>>u are right, if the object is in centre it would look dull, so there goes off-center concept.but wouldnt it better if u try horizontally instead of vertically?

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I understand Mostaq bhai....I am not telling to keep objects in middle always....we should try other places like what you are doing...but my concern is kinare rakhte giye jeno beshi kinare pore na jay....tokhon dekha jabe Golden Rule follow korte giye onno meaning chole ashbe viewer der kache...like as a viewer I felt that...it seems it cut at the top.....and it would be great if you share some learning about Golden Point/Rule with us :mrgreen:
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Amit & Asif bhai,

Both of ur suggestions/logic's are good and I also feel that after looking the design again. U know that, we always miss the mistake of our work.....it looked nice to me when working on it. From now on I will definitely will try to be more cautious about this. Thanks for all ur kind responses..
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looking forward to see the next shot Mostaq bhai ....rooooooooooooock !!
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Inspiration from a book cover...
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colors are not pleasant to me. keep going.
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its getting complicated i think.......would be better if u place border around the image....i mean...its hard to recognize that this is a slide show. :D
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smasif wrote:off
What does that means???
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ooh sorry mostaq bhai not to described elaborately. i found overall bit off, dark though some part is very bright...keep good work (Y)

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Like ur work.... man....... keep posting....... have fun (Y)
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