Rifle Match Box

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bappy
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This is the first sample for this project
They gave me these following options

1.color should be use CMY no black
2.Rifle object and product name (RIFLE) should be bold or more focused.

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asifshahid
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Very similar to "Dolphin" brand. Traditional design (may be client's requirements). Inconsistency in Bengali and English fonts weight. There is a break one of the rifles joint (wood and iron), which is absent in other.
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I like the color scheme. Very distinctive from the other products on the line(atleast the ones i have seen). I don’t mind the font weight difference for this case. It’s the rifles that bothers me. They look a bit ...ummm...unprofessional too me. Maybe just a single or two color shape will benifit them.
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