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Hi guys
i have posted a thread named Website for a foreign bengali community......there i got a lot of critique....from that moment on i worked hard on web designing.....and as a out put just following template has come......comment plz...
The web site for an online movie sharing place......thanks.


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omaaaa!! your design improved lot(in terms of web design).....really....onek polished hoyeche...you are a quick learner (Y) kichu kichu comment ache...ami bashay giye dhire shuste edit mark korbo... you are awesome..
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Thank u Asif Bhai...amar design jodi bhalo hoi oi khane apnar credit 99%. amare j help korsen bhai....seta ami jani.....anywaz thnx and waitin for ur reply.
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Design ager cheya onek bhalo hoise.. besh kisu comment ase.. kintu pore boli.. age importent koyek ta...

a. Video player section eged hole video play korte parbe na... Flash player ta programmer -er jonno manage kora kotin hobe

b. Soto type guli "none" hole bhalo hobe.. some places you did that.. but some are still.. check image...
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c. Total width aro beshi like 1000px hole bhalo hoto, 17" monitor-e akebare soto dekha jay.. wide screen monitor hole ki hobe!!!!

d. Boxer edge guli same hoy nai.. in that case you could not use one edge for every boxes.. check them

e. Menu-r dui pashe ato faka na rekhe menu aktu boro hole bhalo lagto...

no more now... but where the "Contact" menu.. I did not get it here... is it not necessary part of design...........

Sorry if its lots and hard...
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Gray-Red combination and color choosing ta khub bhalo hoyeche Amit er...soothing!!
baki gula to Partha bhai ee point out kore diyeche...tao ami 2 ta add korchi:

1. Bitten menu ta bhalo lagchena. (my thought: I always try like you to make something different, creative...but kauke diye check koriye nile bhalo, whether this creativity is ok or not...here this is not working...)

2. Footer er text ektu choto kore den...11 would be fine

other than that everything is cool now.
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Partha da and Asif bhai..Thank u very much...

>>Partha Da....ami Photoshop a type niye onek suffer korasi...i mean amar bujhte aktu prob hossilo...type problem akhon onak ta overcome korsi.....i think problem holo...ai template ta banate 2 ta version use korsi....CS3 + CS4.tai mone hoi amon hoyase..ok..tarpor o NONE diye dekhbo....

>>Video player r jonno aro besi space lagbe??? bujhlam na...aktu bolbe ki???
>> hmm...total width...ok bariye debo
>>Boxer r edge fix korbo...
>> Menu ta asole onno rokom korte chaiselam...some kind of experimenting....ok...aga sob fix kore dekhi match kore kina..then na hole change kore felbo.

thnxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Asif Bhai>>> hmm..amar o mone hosse that kind of button isnt workin here....

>> Text aro choto kore debo....thnxxxxxxxxxx
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