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Bhai o bonera mon khule comment korte paren!
1-2-3 suru koren...
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okey time to critique. I am not supporting this design. apnar business card ki ar ei ta ki...pasha-pashi rakhen and judge koren ? design hishebe eita bhalo design hoyeche but failed to maintain the branding. business card er briefcase ta ekhane use korte parten....you used small letters like: p (for phone), m (for mobile) and so on in business card. but ekhane abar arek style introduce koriyechen, which is not good. bottom right artwork is unexpected. Left long black stripe ta bhalo lagenai... Logo and business card ta thik moto design kore felle onek kaj easy hoye jay, in a word ar kono kj ee thakena for letterhead and envelopes. ektu tricky way te baki gula handle korlei hoye jay...

so my suggestion(from my experience): design a good logo first, other wise you will suffer. Then business card and then rest of all. this is a chain. Business card design korar shomoy ja ja use korben kheyal rakhte hobe oigula letterhead, envelopes, and other stationaries ee use kora jabe kina...even onek company website oo same rakhte chesta kore....apnar business card ta A class hoyeche bolei ami oita follow korte bolchi.....heheh onek gyan diye fellam :P
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Mahabub Bhai.....ami business card ta dekhi nai.....tobe ata thik j letterhead should follow business card accordingly...cause it is called branding....Business card,letterhead....envelop ...web site (most of the cases..among most of the famous companies)seem alike.cause everybody prefer branding now a days.
design amar kase bhaloi lagse..but left side r stripe ta chara.
thank u....keep experimenting...
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Asif bhai right.. you should fix your brand first...
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akhon ki kisuta valo lagse? kindly mon theke bolun! sabar kase comment chai.
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please upload a bit larger image. Its hard to read the information. :)
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Outlook bhalo lagse... cool............................
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hmm...bhalo lagse....akhon
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Sorry bhai net er obostha kharap cilo, r akbar upload korlam akhon mone hoi valo dakha jabe. pls comment

@asif bhai.................................!
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Superb... Jotil hoise mama...
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cool now...though there is a inconsistency in ph/moile/email title...but its up to you... :) overall good branding (Y)
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cool...............
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bujhlam na...amar monitor a right side r lekha gula kata ascha....except this...design is ok...carry on Mahbub Bhai
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amit wrote:bujhlam na...amar monitor a right side r lekha gula kata ascha....except this...design is ok...carry on Mahbub Bhai
Actually this happens if your monitor is 17" or less. if you drag and drop the image in your desktop then you will be able to see the whole image.
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thanks asif bhai, partha da, amit, chhagol bhai and all
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