My first character animation project "Lonely"

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Just finished storyboarding. Here is storyboard.

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The Story: basic idea is a little girl came from school but mom and dad not at home so she sitting in front of door waiting for them. doll beside her indicate tht she played with it for sometime now she feel's lonely. suddenly a butterfly flying through in front of her got her attention and happynes showes on her face. b'fly sit on a flower . she stand up and come near to the flower to have better look. then she jump a little and clap's like childs do. then she try to touch the b'fly then b'fly fly away.

well tht is a little story came on my mind. :-D


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I like your story and the visualization ... keep playing ...
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good story indeed...kobe amra eitar animation dekhte pabo??? :D
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wow nice story and visualization!
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Smasif its in R&D now .hopefully soon:)
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darklord wrote:Smasif its in R&D now .hopefully soon:)
cool. ek gheyami komanor jonno apne camerar position change kore dekhte paren. hope bhalo lagbe (Y)
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nice.. waiting for complete story animation..........
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Thnx buddy's
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nice one..
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thnx i am now doing modeling stuff i think it will take long time as i am just a begainer gotta learn many things and gotta study abt childish movement ,how they react etc..
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was trying to figureout how the school bag should look
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well :-P was trying to do essence drawing donno if i did it right!
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good job
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ya good job...I liked the colors...."Don't Kill Me" is good too :D keep going!
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